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One of the problems with having a lot of complicated stuff going on in the background to keep your audience in suspense is that eventually you have to explain everything. I’m trying to keep the exposition concise and clear, but[…]↓ Read the rest of this entry…
DANGER CAY: Chapter 117 — Through the Storm
Oct03
“There should be a bridge somewhere under all this water”
“Guys! Routine #17…!”
“You’ve known Hannibal long enough to know how he operates…”
Would’a worked too, except my brother’s not stupid ! (Most of the time!)
“You’re telling me Hannibal actually fell for that cockamamie trap?”
“Like Nijinsky on a banana peel!”
“It all went according to plan!”
“Hannibal just LOVES submarines!”
DANGER CAY: Chapter 108 — Following the Clues
Feb18
“Pretty obvious, Peaches! Not up to your usual standards.”